Vet's Wife and Homeless
She’s standing on a corner
her cardboard sign in thin letters
looking like she could be ahead
of me in line at Target. Just a pink coat
and a flimsy sign, no vet missing
half a leg, all her teeth.
I wonder where her husband is
wonder if he’s on a couch somewhere watching
T.V. waiting for Rhonda
to come home with some pocket change.
They’ll head to the movies,
shake their heads at all the poor saps
who handed over coins.
These are the stories I create--
my yellow reassurance
so I can shake my head and drive forward
without a thought to the night
that drifts in like a black tide.
But it’s all just good fiction
mine and theirs.
That our shoulders could touch
in this grey world while we slide
past with slanted eyes, wondering
what will save us.
her cardboard sign in thin letters
looking like she could be ahead
of me in line at Target. Just a pink coat
and a flimsy sign, no vet missing
half a leg, all her teeth.
I wonder where her husband is
wonder if he’s on a couch somewhere watching
T.V. waiting for Rhonda
to come home with some pocket change.
They’ll head to the movies,
shake their heads at all the poor saps
who handed over coins.
These are the stories I create--
my yellow reassurance
so I can shake my head and drive forward
without a thought to the night
that drifts in like a black tide.
But it’s all just good fiction
mine and theirs.
That our shoulders could touch
in this grey world while we slide
past with slanted eyes, wondering
what will save us.
7 Comments:
wow. I like the very small details..the teeth the pink coat and grey world. A thought provoking poem.
very powerful... i especially like "yellow reassurance" and the last stanza. i feel lik you described a moment i've had a thousand times.
I have enjoyed returning to your blog and reading the latest posts - your writing is a joy to read. Thanks.
wow. talk about syncronicity, you and i yesterday.
this is very, very good.
and also sad.
the pink feels blue.
I like the colours that you've dispersed throughout the poem ... a rainbow of thought, representing the differences of experience. JP
Yes, very powerful poem. And the last stanza is excellent.
Happy New Year, EMC! Here's wishing you lots of poety in 2007!
Love the last stanza.
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